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Every moment tears me apart
I don't want the pain to heal
I'd rather die in pain than find someone else
Every moment ...tearing me apart..
What matters now? It's all gone
I can't believe all this happened..
I feel like giving it all up now
I don't want to turn back to normal..Somewhere a change is occuring..
..Making me more miserable than i already am..
..I just wanna tell you how i am feeling..
..I know it doesn't matter...
Each moment hurts you more than you think..
And theres nothing you can do about it...
I remember,
Who else will?
You tore me apart,Tears of grief stream down my face,Wishing I still had you
How Shocked was I to know everything was a lie?
How crushed was I to know that you don't care?
There's nothing that means to me anymore!
You tore my heart apart,Crushed it,Shattered it into pieces i cannot find.
Every night of mine is nothing but desolateness filled with misery,your hurtful words grasp my head.
Your words,Equivalent to a sharp knife pushed into my heart,Or maybe even worse,I can't believe this happened,I still think you're the one,I still have hope,and yet i feel so numb and hopeless,I guess I am hopefulless..
For All the trouble you have caused,For all the pain you have put me through,I have nothing else to say except I hate you,But i Love you.
I don't want the pain to heal
I'd rather die in pain than find someone else
Every moment ...tearing me apart..
What matters now? It's all gone
I can't believe all this happened..
I feel like giving it all up now
I don't want to turn back to normal..Somewhere a change is occuring..
..Making me more miserable than i already am..
..I just wanna tell you how i am feeling..
..I know it doesn't matter...
Each moment hurts you more than you think..
And theres nothing you can do about it...
I remember,
Who else will?
You tore me apart,Tears of grief stream down my face,Wishing I still had you
How Shocked was I to know everything was a lie?
How crushed was I to know that you don't care?
There's nothing that means to me anymore!
You tore my heart apart,Crushed it,Shattered it into pieces i cannot find.
Every night of mine is nothing but desolateness filled with misery,your hurtful words grasp my head.
Your words,Equivalent to a sharp knife pushed into my heart,Or maybe even worse,I can't believe this happened,I still think you're the one,I still have hope,and yet i feel so numb and hopeless,I guess I am hopefulless..
For All the trouble you have caused,For all the pain you have put me through,I have nothing else to say except I hate you,But i Love you.
yh,it's my entry for the "aching to the act contest",I allow it to be submitted into The Aching to the act contest,by =VertigoArt
Ty alot!
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Yes,the first part is from my poem,my other poem.
written by me First part,Surrender yourself
Ty alot!
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Yes,the first part is from my poem,my other poem.
written by me First part,Surrender yourself
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I feel a bit of Zutara-ness in your poems. The problem is,is that there are grammar errors. For example,never write ".." it's "..." and that's proper grammar. Otherwise,again,great writing.